During the first full week of lock down, Room 22 students were tasked with creating a Shape or Concrete Poem. To assist them to understand this task they had to watch a couple of videos explaining how to create a 'Shape' poem. Below is an example created by Salma.
Ka pai Salma and Room 22. I can see from older blog posts that you've done a lot of learning about these poems. Stay safe Room 22 and keep up the awesome blogging!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Salma,
ReplyDeleteI saw this blog post in your individual blog and I wondered what is a shape poem!
Thanks for sharing your work. I'm looking forward to reading more of your learning!
- Miss Laxa
FROM MRS A @ NWS
ReplyDeleteMalo e lelei Room 22
I have never heard of "Concrete Poems" before. I have learnt something new today. Yay. Thank you for sharing Salma's poem. Room 22 I always look forward to seeing your poems as they are well written and very well presented.
I look forward to seeing your class blog again.
from Mrs A
Tēnā koe Salma,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this poem, now I feel compelled to create my own.
I think you should feel good about this piece.
Keep up the great work!
Mauri ora
Wow Salma! This is such a beautiful poem and such a unique poetry style. I am very impressed. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteMalo Room 22
ReplyDeleteWhat a cool activity to do for lockdown! Thank you Salma for sharing your poem! I like how the title goes down the stem, that’s pretty creative!
Can’t wait to see what other lockdown activities you’ve done!
What a great poem Salma. I am looking forward to seeing other peoples poems in their blogs. Did anyone do a shape poem about lockdown? Keep up the great work room 22.
ReplyDeleteWow Salma and Room 22, your all great poets!
ReplyDeleteI love how beautifully presented your poem was Salma, its colourful and reflects your poems words.
Kia ora room 22. Its me Ibrahim from Waikowhai Primary School. Wow ka pai to the students who did that poem. I really liked reading it. The poem was awesome you have been doing a lot of work. Good job for working really hard. Keep up the awesome work you do. Keep sharing your learning on your blogs. Kia Kaha.
ReplyDeleteKia ora room 22! I am a student commenting from Waikowhai primary school. My name is Zara! I like how you did shape poems! they look so fun to do! What I can say is that this is amazing work and I like the bright colours on the image! so creative! Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteHi Rm 22,
ReplyDeleteI am amazed to see you're beautiful work good work salma.
The colors are so pretty and colorful.
You guys are very very creative.
Keep up the good work.
Bye!